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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I love first kisses. Maybe I'm such a romantic sap but they always make me so happy. I wonder if Sirius will finally say something if he sees them romantically linked. Stupid cheating jerk. I thought it was weird in the first chapter how she talked about trying to get him to settle down and marry her because she's only fifteen. But I have a feeling with Pureblood families that maybe they want to start planning these things as early as possible. I wonder if Lucy will get Snape to settle down with her. From her comment about him helping her brew a concoction for her child's stomachache, it seems so. :)

Haha, I don't know if you've noticed but most of my reviews, I just like to ramble on about my likes and dislikes and thoughts on the chapter. I guess I'm not very constructive but that's just what I do. Let me know if you don't like it, I can try and be more helpful?

forsakenphoenix (ravenclaw)

Author's Response: Oh, Sirius will indeed have his say :)

Yeah, it is weird, but I meant to emphasize how ridiculous marriage in pureblood families is. I mean, if he doesn't hurry up and propose, she might graduate without becoming a Mrs., or maybe even without a diamond! Gasp! :)
Lucy's relationship with Sev is a teensy bit different, though, as you'll see. Not so much obvious pressure :)

You're doing fine. I can't believe you're even taking the time to review this little bit of fluff I wrote. The story is written and finished, so there's only so much CC that's helpful at this point, you know? At least for this story, anyway.

Well, thanks for another review :)

academica


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