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Review:MyMyMiss says:
“Oh, well, congratulations. Do you want a prize for finishing the book in record time?”

I adore that line!! ^.^ Like seriously I think it's just Hermione all over, Draco thinks his all high and mighty because he finished the book in two days, and BOOM Hermione shoots him down, wavering his tactics on being able to leave Hogwarts with a legacy bigger than intended ^.^ Oh its good >.<

Do you know all your stories are so correct within its grammar that I envy you, not once have I come across a mispelled word of misplaced aphostrophy or comma, except the first one, but that was my own opinion.

When I very first read this I honestly believed that this would purely be based on a stupid bet and it would be crap too read, but you portrayed the bet perfectly, and Hermione has so much Attitude, especially in this chapter that it makes it come across that Draco really has no hope of winning the girl.

“Hey, where are you going?” Draco called after her.

“Away,” She called back. “Isn’t it obvious?”

She;s so... eh, what's that word. Annoyed? I think thats the right word, she can't even give him the time of day ^.^ And personally I think thats great >.<

Onwward... xx

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