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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
What! You're making my poor Sirius into a playboy? Hmph. Oh well, I guess that just opens up Lucy for Snape!

I'm glad she did remarkably well in class thanks to Snape. Though I'm confused how she can cut thick thin slices of mushroom. Seems a bit contradictory to me.

I think my favorite line of the whole chapter was when Lucy told Sirius becoming a lesbian was preferable to dating him. That made me laugh. :)

forsakenphoenix (ravenclaw)

Author's Response: I know, I know. I wrote this one and one other of my stories a long time ago in my head and I just had to get them down, but I didn't really change them much, which meant that I still included a cliche about Sirius because I wasn't aware that it was a cliche at the time. Anyway, something had to split him and Lucy up so she could get with Sev, right?

Yeah, I'm not entirely sure where I went with that. In another review, I said that I had some trouble trying to find a way for someone to be bad at Potions, and I reiterate that here.

She has got some good lines, if I do say so myself :)

Well, thanks for the reviews! I sort of hope you keep reading (or not, since I have such better stuff out there, gah!)

academica


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