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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
So I really like this first chapter! I was kind of iffy about reading it just because it was about Lucy Malfoy but I decided to take a chance and it's good! I don't think I've ever read a story where Lucius Malfoy has a sister so this'll be an interesting journey. I guess I'm not surprised that Lily is best friends with Lucy considering her fondness for Snape. I'm a little more surprised that Sirius is dating a Slytherin. But maybe that's just my own characterization of Sirius coming into play. Lucy seems very nice and not very Slytherin-like so that could be it.

As always, I love your descriptions. You have such a way with words. It flows really well and you don't use a lot of filler. It's like every word has a purpose. It's very nice to read.

I chuckled when Lucy said being seen with Snape would be like social suicide and Lily retorted that her not making sixth year potions would be social suicide. So either way she's going to commit social suicide. Ha, poor Lucy.

forsakenphoenix (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: Hey!

Oh, God, don't read this one. It's all fluffy and not at all a representation of my best work.

Anyway, since you insist...

I put Sirius and Lucy together because they're both purebloods who don't really jive well with the rest of their families. I figured it would provide kind of an interesting friendship/romance between them. Lucy is pretty sweet, but at the same time she sort of lives for herself and no one else, and you'll see that in later chapters.

Poor Lucy indeed :)

Thanks for the review!

academica


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