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Review:MyMyMiss says:
Oh poor Ron :'(
This one made me year up a little at the end, and get slightly annoyed at the same time, Silly Muggle parents not understanding the wizarding world or Harry Potter, stupid people!! -.-

Anyway, I ma back with another review ^.^

This chapter was really good. It had alot of background detail, explaining that he had got er drunk and Pregnant, plus I loved the scene that I have in my head of Molly standing at Ginny's window hollering down to the Garden at him that was halarious, but nothing made me laugh as much as this part ^.^

-Its Ronald sir

Do you really think I care? You ignorant prat, when I was your age... I laughed so hard! It was priceless. I just couldn't stop laughing ^.^ I keep scrolling up just to re-read it ..< It's really good.

You really have a good techinique set up here with your writing and the plot, the plot is half way in between knowing whats going to happen and being left in suspense. Like Molly at the end, Oh the Suspense, being told your going to have to look after a child cause you got their daughter inpregnatet - Silly Boy - Plot line thickens.

This was a really funny chapter and I quite enjoyed it !! Thank you for the amazing read, and if you ever want another review, feel free to re-request, but remember to rate your link ;) xx

Forum name: MyMyMiss
House: Slytherin.

Author's Response: Thankyou very much :)

I hadn't noticed the tenses until now so thanks for that :) I'm halfway through Chapter 3 now so hopefully itll be up within the next week (depending on the length of the queue)!

Thanks for the great reviews and giving me the determination to carry on!

Thanks again
Keira :)


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