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Review:Harrypotterbookworm says:
Heart wrenching. Utterly heart wrenching. You beautifully link together all the stages of ... I don't know what you'd call them but him slowly loosing his memory ect. is wonderfully linked together. From my point of view, it seems that after each memory he slowly gets more and more lucid, I guess you could say.

Speaking of the memories, the memories you choose to put in here are perfect. They add to a way that enhances the loosing the memory business, but doesn't take any concentration away from this story and in to another. And that, I have to say, takes a lot of skill. Great job.

While it is a little confusing at times, just with what's happening and where they are, it actually adds to the story, for you can imagine that he wouldn't be the most aware person in the universe right at that moment. Also, the characterisation of both of them is beautifully done, especially Frank's description of how she makes him feel complete ect.

Overall, amazing. Just ... amazing. I can't say anything else. Hugs,

- HPB (otherwise known as nikkinike from Ravenclaw) ;D

Author's Response: ee thanks Nikki! ♥

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