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Review:charlottetrips says:
Ahhh! LuckySeven!!! I am SO sorry that I am completely late with this review!!

I’m so excited to be reviewing your story!! I was going to try and do my review like your amazingly hilarious and completely splendiferous reviews but…I’m really not like that so you’ll have to settle for Char’s Brand of Running Reviews (which are exceptional by the by ::wink, wink::). Another reason why I’m so excited is BECAUSE of your wonderful reviews which communicate so clearly and are just a blast to read, I just couldn’t imagine what a whole STORY would be like with you at the keyboard!

Now, onto the actual review :P

LOVED YOUR FIRST LINE!!! What a way to get the reader’s attention!

This description of sleeping: “Sleeping had always been a hard task, turning off my mind, closing my eyes, and trusting that I was somehow safe enough to enter a state of obliviousness were all beyond me.” is scarily accurate to how I’ve felt before when I couldn’t sleep. Maybe this is the reason for insomnia? Like the real underlying reason?

I’m so intrigued already by the story and I’m just in the middle of it! What happened to Lindsay? Or more importantly, who the hizzy is she?

I loved how you got Sirius’ emotions concerning Lindsay clearly present in just this little bit here of how it wasn’t his job to ask. And how he clearly notices all the little details. I totally have something for unrequited love…

Beautiful line: “Now, she felt her fragility, like a piece of cracked glass that knew exactly how close it was to shattering.” Such a great way of getting the reader to understand exactly how this girl is feeling.

Ah!!! What is the back story?!?! You’re lucky (seven) for many reasons that I held off for so long on reviewing…in fact, it was a deliberate and brilliant ploy on my part? Why, you ask? Because 1) I feel guilty and will now review more than one chapter (as you wrote a helluva lot more by the time I got to this) 2) It’s Review Extravaganza and 3) because I like this story!! Yay!

charlottetrips [Ravenclaw] (not quite beating your record here)

Author's Response: *giggle* Charlotte!!! *hugs*
You were probably expecting something a bit bouncier from me, huh? lol. And no worries about the delay, I'm about a month behind on my own reviews...:0
Thank you very much for this lovely review. It may be the longest one I've gotten on this story so far, so there's a record! ;)
That first line made me feel a bit melodramatic, but then I thought that this characterization of Sirius was already such a drama queen that nobody would notice. It seems that my evil plot worked that time!;)
I think that the lack of trust/other such hinky issues are what is keeping poor Sirius awake. So you hit the nail on the head, darling.
Lindsey is James twin sister by the way...people keep asking, lol. It comes up later! I promise! :D
Like I said...Sirius is a drama queen. Especially around Lindsey. I spend a lot of time rolling my eyes at him when I write.
Well, your deliberate and brilliant ploy worked. I had beenlulled into a false sense of security! Lol.
And, no need to feel guilty, this review made me quite happy!
Thanks again!!
Hugs, Bubbles, and Other Assorted Wonderfully Splendiferous Items,
Lucky
P.S I saw you using the word splendiferous over there!! :D


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