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Review:MyMyMiss says:
Hey :) MyMyMiss from the Forums here with your requested review.

Well...Umm.. Wow.

Have you actually read your own story? Well I suppose you have. ^.^ This was incrediable. The emotion, the depth, the sadness of this story toward the end is really emotional to read. Yes, I am crying, but lets move on. >.<

The way this story is written is really unique. I can see and feel the story, I can feel myself running through the halls with whoever is holding my hand, I can see those around me falling and fighting, throwing spells in all directions while some are running for higher or lower ground. You take a really sad story and turned it into a beautifly written piece of work.

I am really impressed with this story. It just has me gapping as I re-read it for the sixth time ^.^

Only one fault, which is minor and my own opinion is..
-why would he choose you, out of hundreds? But you were his target from the first moment he saw you, it seems.
I personally think the , it seems. makes the sentence drag a little, just a tiny bit, miniture ^.^

Anyway, thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of writing. ^.^ I think i'm going to raid your page later for more beautiful stories x

Forum Name: MyMyMiss
House: Slytherin.

Author's Response: Wow! This was a fantastic review -- you have left me virtually speechless. :) Thank you! This definitely made my day.

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