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Review:Ronsgirl29 says:
Hey there Gryffie!

This is the first story I've ever read about Marcus Flint, so yay for new things! I really like how you portrayed him as slightly awkward around people, it was a unique way to characterize him!

Just one thing I saw,
"the skills he needed to wooed his future wife" - having woo instead of wooed would make a little more sense

There were also a few sentences that could have used a comma, but other than that I didn't really notice anything :)

I think putting Marcus with Daphne is a nice idea. And it was cute that she laughed, helping Flint not feel so shy! I hope they end up happy together :)

Very nice oneshot, I enjoyed reading it
-Ronsgirl29 (gryffindor)

Author's Response: Another Lirate! *waves Gryffie flag*

Thank you for your review. I was editing this just now, I don't know why but Daphne just came to mind when I was writing this so I thought it'd be cute :P

It's the first thing I write about Flint though you'll probably see him soon!

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