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Review:academica says:
Hey there!

I liked this twist on the usual Dramione, and I loved the ending, with Ron hitting Draco for taking his girl. I was a little confused in the beginning, though. Hermione said that Draco was working for the Order all along, but then she implied that he was a coward until the final battle. Like with Snape, it would definitely take courage to work for the Order when you are expected to be a Death Eater. I think what you might have meant to imply is that Draco wasn't a Death Eater because he believed in the side of good.

I loved your characterization of Hermione and Rose, and I liked how you did Lucius as well, especially with that line about there being no tears in his robes. Great job! :)

academica (Slytherin)

Author's Response: thanks :D

not bad for my first fic eh? lol its totally full of holes that need fixin, but i figure i'll leave it as is for nostalgia purposes :D

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