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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I'm not usually a fan of song-fics just because people don't tend to write them very well. But I love TSwift! So I couldn't say no to this. You picked an excellent song for this fic, by the way.

You make me feel so bad for Ginny in this story. I never really thought about how she would feel after Harry broke it off with her so it's interesting to see your perspective on it. I feel like Ginny has such a hero worship for Harry so, of course, she'd be devastated when he left her. You write her emotions very well with that.

I like how you have her writing to release her frustration, anger and sadness over Harry's abandonment. I always found writing to be a very cathartic experience.

Going along with her hero worship, this line stuck out to me: "He was perfect, so perfect, entirely perfect." It's not good to be in a relationship with someone you think is perfect because you're just putting them on a pedestal and it only leads to disappointment in the end. :( I thought that entire paragraph was a bit dramatic. I don't know, I always thought Ginny as stronger than that, you know?

It must be terrible to keep reliving the moment when he says goodbye over and over again in her sleep. I wouldn't want to sleep either.

I liked the ending though, how she knew she needed to start acting normal but she wouldn't forget her love for Harry. The line about being "forever haunted" tied in well with the lyrics of the song.

Nice job though! You managed to impress someone who usually doesn't dig songfics. ;)

forsakenphoenix (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: Oh my, this is so old. I can feel my cheeks getting red because of this. I'm actually shocked that you liked it, because I really need to edit it. This was a time when I was way overdramatic with everything, and that clearly came through.
Anyways, enough self pity, thank you so much for the review! You really made me smile, and I'm so glad I could write a songifc you enjoyed! I really appreciate the amazing review and all your kind words. I love the song too, and it just screamed H/G to me.
Thanks again!
-Naida

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