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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Your FIRST story? You must be on some type of talent pills! It's not possible to have a first story THIS good. Or at least, so I thought.
If you couldnt already tell, this was brilliant. It takes a lot to get me to love a 500 word story. The other one I read was super, but you even had dialogue and romance and stuff in here. How you did that is beyond me.
One thing I did pick up on was a couple of tense issues. You lapsed into the present tense in a couple spots. (i.e. "she knew what he's said" should be "she knew what he had said") It was just slightly confusing to have those errors, but its nothing that you cant fix :) If you want me to point out everything, just send me a PM or something.
Other than that, this was absolutely fantastic. Your writing drips of emotions, and I'm still awed that this is your first story. Amazing job!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the fantastic review! If you could see me right now with this large ridiculous smile grinning the whole time and feeling extremely giddy thanks to you! You truly made my day! Well I well look into to tenses issues and if I don´t come up with it I will definitely PM you. Once again thank you thank you thank you!



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