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Review:melian says:
Wow. What an interesting piece. You've really got into her head here, with the comment that they don't think about her as Ariana any more, as a person, because she doesn't feel like a person. I also liked how she was disassociating herself from her family because they were doing the same to her - she knew about the boy her brother loved, but didn't bother to learn his name because it was irrelevant to her. The memories and regrets were all too human, too, and th efeeling of falling, falling ... how tragic. Because we know what it's referring to, but it was so sad that her life was cut short like that, and then we know, but she doesn't, the impact that event has on the others in her family. Again, this was really realy well done. Fantastic job. :D

melian (gryffindor)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I'm glad you thought so - I worked hard on this, and it's nice to hear that it wasn't all for nothing. xD I appreciate that so much! :)

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