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Review:melian says:
And another evocative story from you. There were a few tense changes in this, where you went from present tense to past tense and back again, and in the first line she should have "jet black hair", but aside from that it was a most intriguing read. I'm dying to know what happened to her, and I think you captured really well the sad reality that people do just ignore people passed out outside pubs, tripping over them, ripping their clothes - it was very well done. It's amazing how much you put into so few words. Again, an excellent job!

melian (gryffindor)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I must say that this is my best story that I have ever written and once I have time I am going to write more wicked awesome stories :D. Yeah, I have a little tense problem...hehe I am working on that though :D Gah, I am so happy with all of these nice reviews...thanks

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