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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
I really like how you started this out with flashbacks! Instead of picking up where you left off, you added a new element to the sequel, which really made it stand out. And I think that can be hard to do for a sequel.
I do, however, think the last was better. Not saying that this wasn't good, because it was, but I had a few minor issues with it. It seemed a bit rushed to me. Like it was just rolling through the song without much development. Again, I can tell this is earlier work, so I'm glad you've improved!
I really did enjoy this though. Lovely job!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Nadia,

Yeah, I'm just gonna go and write Nadia for now, kay? :) And I totally get what you're saying. I just wanted a sequel and I didn't write it properly and blahblahblah, BAM--not-that-great sequel is out. But thanks again, I'm kind of amused how much my writing has changed over time.


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