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Review:Akussa says:
Hi again!

Although this chapter is much shorter, it is even more haunting the the previous one. I love that, after only two chapters, we have seen different sides of Raven and already have a pretty clear idea of who she is and what she is made of.
I'm begining to like the other characters as well. Nydia and Vanessa, in their own ways, are great characters. Different of course but their personalities and destinies are almost already precise and the reader(I mean me!) already feels attached to all these characters.

Great work on the emotional level; you really conveyed Raven's emotional journey to the reader and we already feel for this character we have just met. I can't wait to read the rest!

Akussa (Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Haha thanks. Raven really is my pride and joy, and I'm gonna be motivating myself to write a bit more of them pretty soon. Thanks ! :D

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