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Review:Akussa says:
Hello dearest!

Woah, you just blew me away with this opening chapter. It is simply amazing! I just love how you open with this rather horific nightmare and then things get better but when we learn more about this girl, well, horific suits her life well doesn't it?

I have to say that so far, everything about this chapter was good. The dialogues, the characters, the descriptions and detailing, the action...
I feel bad that I hadn't read this before and couldn't understand why but then, I took a look back to the summary. Please, work on it; it is not remotly as engaging and great as your story is! People need to be interested and give this story a look after reading the summary because we are missing out on something great!

Also, kudos on the grammar and flow, the rythm doesn't always flow but it fits with the story. It's like you break the flow to make the reader question what is going on and want to read more. I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to read on!

Akussa (Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm actually going to go work on that story summary now...it's rather a pain cuz I only have so many words and I have so much else I want to put in there.

Thanks for the review! :D


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