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Review:Blue Flame says:
Oh! The ending seriously sent chills down my spine, so well done! I really liked getting this look into Regulus, and I was even feeling bad for Kreacher. D: It was very well written, and I absolutely LOVE how it was his anger over the mistreatment of Kreacher by the Dark Lord that led to his betrayal! The fact that earlier he was also wishing he was more like his brother was lovely, as it was something I don't believe I've seen before. =)

This line ' I cannot resist the siren call, the liquid my body is demanding I drink.' was definitely one of my favorites. =) I think the only thing I'd critique about this chapter is the spacing because it seems a bit much? Other than that this is a lovely story! ^^

-Caiti [Cappie/Hufflepuff]

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

I'm so happy (seriously, my smile is so huge right now) that you liked my explanation of his betrayal. I'm so glad you liked the way this was written!

As for the spacing, I'll look it over. It could be the spacing the site demands or it could just be the fact that sometimes I seem overfond of the single-line paragraphs. We shall see...

Thanks so much for taking the time to review (and such a lovely one, too).

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