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Review:Sakurasou says:
This was such a cute oneshot! The banter between Fred and Scarlett had me giggling the whole way through. I really like how you included their history and the way he pushed her into the lake and how she gave him a scar. It was the beginning of a dysfunctional relationship indeed! I loved how Scarlett didn't want to admit that she liked Fred until she say 'him' kissing Katie.

The last line was definitely my favourite though. It was just so cheeky!

Great job! :D

-SakuraSou
Hufflepuff

Author's Response: i'm glad you enjoyed it! i enjoyed writing it and have even gone back and edited it before. and the history between them is only too fascinating to ignore, so i couldn't leave the readers without the knowledge of them before the kiss. i almost think of these two as a quieter lily and james, but that's just my humble opinion.

and their dysfunctional relationship was just so much fun to write. i actually enjoy writing the banter between the two of them, because it was so lively. but thanks for the awesome review, and look out for the sequel...if i write one of course (;


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