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Review:AC_rules says:
Hey there, its acrules from the forums (although I guess thats pretty obvious) - sorry about taking so long to review. I've been on holiday and then a couple of other things came up. Anyway! I'm glad I finally did take time to come read and review because this was a really really beautiful start. I know nothing much has happened yet, and maybe I'm just a sucker for babies, but I though Oliver was so cute in this! I loved that he started whispering stories to her and when he said that both him and Sarah 'fly' my heart melted a little bit.

Having read your summary and knowing what the story is going to be about I'm already really not wanting the accident to happen to ruin all the happiness that you've created here. Ahha, I really loved it (it helps that I'm in a highly sappy mood, I suppose)... but well done! I'll go r&r the next chapter right now :)

Author's Response: Hi!! :D

Don't worry about it, I hope you had a good holiday :)

I love babies too! I've always wanted to write a chapter about a new born and I thought - why not do it right now? - so I did :P

The flying bit was a bit cheesey though, but it is a big part of their relationship and I needed Sarah to be away at certain times so it fitted quite well, and it makes them quite compatable - me thinks :D

I'm dreading writing the accident - is that bad? I love it the way it is, and I'm already feeling mean writing the third chapter :/ haha, I'm waaay to emotionally attched to these characters!

Awesome! I'm just about to reply!
Thanks for the review!!

R xx


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