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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
This is gorgeous. First of all, I love the idea you have for this short story collection. It's a really good idea. I've never read anything about the creation of the Order and I think it could be really interesting reading about it from multiple points of view. The opening for this is just... wow. Really powerful and really effective. I wish I could write like that, dude. Srsly.

I love how you've used present tense. It's really fitting for some reason. I don't usually like it but you've written it really well with no obvious slip ups.

Your characterisation of Minerva is beautiful. You have her spot on. She's her typically concerned self and is really weary about everything and willing to question Dumbledore. Dumbledore is also fantastic. At first I thought he was a little too tight lipped and cryptic about what was going on, and almost cold towards Minerva, but after the story went on a little more I could see that he wasn't at all. In fact, you've got Dumbledore down to a T, in my opinion.

This is a very beautiful opening, and I'll be reviewing more of this later. I have a review extravaganza to ace so this shall help me in my quest haha :D I'm thinking about giving it a favourite too. It's a really stunning idea and really well executed, so far. I applaud you :)

Lorren

Author's Response: Eugh, I don't even know what else to say except thank you so much for such a nice review. It's definitely appreciated! I hope you enjoy the remaining chapters. :)

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