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Review:CoLorful DreaM says:
Wow, I loved this. The flow was perfect and Dom was so lovable. I liked how she was nothing of her mother and sister and how she felt like a Delacour, seeing her in herself wedding gown. The emotion, the expectation all were well described. The ending of her midnight walk was a real surprise which was great, but it got me thinking of who was the one who killed her. I think anyone who read this was thinking the same thing: Who?
The memory at the end of the story fits really great. Why dont you give there a clue? Like someone watching them from distance, angry about her being with Liam even since back in the school days (giving a name is no necessary)? just a thought.
Great story, anyways!

Author's Response: Haha, I actually have no idea who killed her! Almost every review on this has asked that question, and I honestly have no answer. I suppose I was in Dom's mind, and she had no idea who it was, nor that it was coming, so that's what's shown in the piece. Thank you so much for your review, I feel like I struggle with characterisation and description so that's a big compliment!

Thanks so much!

-Giola


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