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Review:academica says:
Hey there! academica here with your review :)

The imagery you've got going on here is beautiful. I loved the beginning with the lion instead of the snake -- very powerful way to set the scene and let the reader know who the main character will be. I also love the care you've taken with characterizing Regulus. In my experience, he's usually portrayed as sort of a loner, but I really like the way you've made him a spoiled rich boy who acts just like his mother. It makes the idea of him getting in deep with Voldemort and then having to back out years later much more tangible; that is, it gives him something to turn around from, a state to mature into, when he makes his drastic reversal later on. I sincerely hope that makes sense, because I really love it. I also think your characterization of Sirius and his mother was spot-on as well. I could definitely empathize with Sirius being so upset that his least favorite people, the ones he was stuck with, would destroy his connection to the one he loves most.

This was such a pleasure to read; thank you for asking for a review. Your writing is really something to be admired and I can tell that you've edited very carefully; not a mistake to be found. OH! And Toujours_Padfoot has been trying desperately to get me to come read 'Life and Times' because I'm such a huge Snape fan. You're incredibly talented, just as she said, and so don't be surprised if I pop over to that one at some point.

Thanks again, and I hope my comments are helpful :)

academica

Author's Response: Wow -- thank you SO much for such a lovely review! I cannot even do your words justice. :3 And that Sarah, I will have to speak with her -- but it would be lovely if you returned! :D

Thank you very, very much!!


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