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Review:taylorj828 says:
Hi there! This is taylorj828 with your requested review. (o: Wow, your story is very unique and different. I've never once read anything from the Sorting Hat's POV! You've done something very clever and put it together well. You used a different POV to tell us about all the new Weasleys and Potters taking over Hogwarts. Funny, sarcastic, and amusing. I think I could read a whole Novella from you in this style. Nice!

Hahaha, I laughed out loud at the Sorting Hat thinking that McGonagall hated the Weaslesys with a passion? I dunno why, really, just that thinking of the stern, all-business McGonagall from the books, and Harry's time, and imagining her surrounded by all their children now, and the hat thinking she hated them.. Just funny, I guess, and it really made me laugh!

Hear them roar, he thought before shouting loudly and cheerily, 'Ravenclaw.'

The entire Great Hall went silent, Louis' hand frozen mid-air above the table he was just about to bang on, James' mouth wide open, cheering soundlessly.

The Sorting Hat smirked smugly as the Headmistress lifted him off Fred's head. He had the feeling this might be the year he would get his bath.

Hear them roar.

I LOVE your ending! I love that Fred was put in Ravenclaw, and I love that the Hat wanted to see all the Weasley Gryffies 'eat it' so to speak! I love the imagery of Louis and James' reactions, and the final thought about the Sorting Hat finally getting a bath, just because he put Fred Weasley in Ravenclaw. Haha!

Very clever and amusing! I really enjoyed your story!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review. I never thought I would write anything from the Hat's POV, but this is what challenges make you do. Worked out pretty good for me, this time.

I'm glad you liked the ending. I had the most fun writing that. I could just see the Hat's smug smile - for as far as the Hat has a mouth - and it just made me laugh out loud while writing it.

Again, thank you for the review!

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