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Review:DetectiveMenace says:
Revolting, starving two children to death, locking them in the dark, taking them away from their families. I nearly lost my lunch. It reminded me of the Holocaust, though, how the Nazis and officers starved and overworked the Jews they captured, men, women and children, just because they were Jewish. I'm not surprised James and Lily couldn't sleep.
But Lily's speech at the end was beautiful and so powerful, about taking sides. I nearly teared up myself. I personally thought that in light of the horrific incident they had just gone through, the ending was perfect.
Absolutely haunting story, and I can't wait for the epilogue.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I agree that it was completely revolting and it made even me feel a bit queasy writing it, as well as lose sleep.

I'm glad you liked Lily's speech -- it took a lot of time and hard work. This story is a labour of love, and I'm really really happy you read it all and reviewed so often. It means so much to me, and I will post the epilogue when I have a spare moment. Thank you for all your reviews!


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