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Review:Keira7794 says:
I love it! Your characterisation is spot on, you really feel like you understand the characters.
I also like how you've used Louis - he tends to be overlooked in most stories!

A few quick points of misspellings or missing words that you might have already noticed:

$ In chapter 1 you described Aine as 'He huge blue eyes, tine mouth' so obviously would normally be 'her' and 'tiny'
$ In Chapter 2 you wrote 'Clive went on strike because we bought the wrong for him' - just missing what was wrong
$ Also in Chapter 3 you wrote 'As the noise of the students faded i began follow them' - you're just missing the word 'to'

Very minor points which I'm sure you've probably noticed anyway! It's a great story and I'm awaiting the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing so quickly! :D

Phew! I kinda have little notes on all of them (I'm not crazy, not crazy at all! :P) And yeah, he seemed like he would be cool - I mean Bill is cool! :D

I hadn't noticed these :/ *scurries off to edit!* Aha they bought the wrong food! :l

I'm writing the next chapter as we type! (speak?)

Thank you so much for the review! Hope to chat to you more on the forums too!

Rach xx

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