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Review:Star_Kid_Love says:
Hi there, it's starkidlove from the fourms with your review :D

Firstly, you nailed the emotion in the story! I looked up the song on youtube and I feel you did the lyrics more justice than the music video and frankie J! You made me despise harry! (In a good way), and it was really powerful to see Lily's emotion at the thought of her father leaving. Your Ginny was wonderful too and the scene fitted to well with the lyrics of the song!

The scene with Rose was also powerful! I loved the way you made her very headstrong, like hermione, and used the fact that she was a gryffindor to be strong. This scene really touched me because my own mother went through it about a year ago and the emotions really hit home, a very good job!

Finally the ending was perfect! You used the final lyrics so well to throw both scenes together to express the raw emotion.

Seriously well done!

R xx

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I was actually quite terrified I wouldn't get the emotion right!
Ha, I didn't mean for anyone to hate Harry (;
I am glad that my writing was very powerful in your opinion(:
And I am glad it fitted well with the lyrics.

Aw, thank you! Yeah, I did try to make her strong, she needed to be for her dad.
And I am glad I got the emotions right for someone who has been in the situation.
Sorry about your mom, by the way.

Thank you! I was actually very worried it would sound kinda cheesy when I put them both together, but I am glad it worked!

Thank you so much for the review! It really means a lot to me! (:

-Sarah
Xxxx


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