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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Hello! Here I am with your request to review your story. Sorry for the day late response it was night in my time zone when you responded to my 'status'. I was fast asleep!

Never--and this is a big never--never have I ever gotten tears in my eyes from the title alone. A small part of me really did hope that the story wouldn't have me begging for a box of tissues but let's be honest those are the best kind.

I loved it. I did. It was very real to me. It reminded me of this friend I used to have and one day in class for some reason my teacher wanted to 'get to know us all' so she went around the room asking personal questions (which was really uncomfortable by the way) and I forgot the exact wording of the question but she started talking about her father. How her Mother and her Father fought so much and one day her Mother had had enough. They were yelling and she wanted him out and she said she wouldn't stop screaming and crying. That she had literally clung to his leg trying to make him not leave and she begged him not to go because she was essentially a Daddy's little girl.

So the story really pulled at my heart strings. Excellent job.

Author's Response: Ha, it's totally fine! (:

Wow!! Tears in your eyes from the title! :O

I am glad that I got the emotion right! Because from your story of that girl in your class is like this I would feel so happy.
I am always afraid I would get the emotion wrong, so I am happy you thought differently!
I am glad you liked it!!

Thanks for the review!


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