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Review:taylorj828 says:
Hi again! I decided to read another chapter of this story. Is it not your newest story? Just curious...!

Wow, so Lucy has to do those things, AND get caught while doing them? Haha, sounds interesting! This list is definitely amazing. Wow, it really sounds like an exciting ride for this year at Hogwarts!

There are some small errors with grammar/mixed words/typos in the story. I just wonder if you've thought of getting a Beta? They can be a great help, and I almost always try to have one myself, a person who can look over my chapter with a second set of eyes to help me catch things. There's a section in the forums to find Beta-Readers, I think. It's just an idea, if you were interested in it. (o: Maybe you already know about it, by now!

Hm, I do wonder why Hunter's name is always italicized? Is there a special reason for that?

Hm, so, Hunter... I hope he had nothing more on his mind than just kissing in that compartment, otherwise it would be very troublesome!

It will be interesting to see if Lucy can do all these things, and make her dad terribly angry. Hehe. (o:

Author's Response: It`s not rewritten yet, but thanks for checking it out. I have also noticed the errors, and I have thought about getting a beta. I just have to finish my stories for the challenges I have entered first. I will do it later, though. As for why I italicize Hunter, I don`t remember. It wrote this a long time ago, and I probably thought it was good than.

Thank you for reading it and giving me advice. It means a lot to me :)

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