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Review:Star_Kid_Love says:
Hi There!

I just wanted to say firstly I don't usually read rose/scorpious and so I was really excited to read this!

I love your third person writing, it has a very JKR air about it, such as your sentence structure and general description. For a beggining of a story this is really well set out and it seems like you have a good plan where this is heading next! I also love the fact it isn't in first person as I think it's way over used in next gen (although I am guilty of doing so)

Even though we didn't get to see much of scopious' character I liked the way you introduced him through Rose's perception of him rather as it already makes the reader question whether the singer scorpious is the real scorpious.

As for Rose, I liked her personality and the fact that you didnt make her fall on her feet with a good job straight after school, it makes your story more believeable. The only tiny issue I had was at her bluntness to scorpious in the street although that may be explained later so I won't dwell on it :)

Overall I think you have the makings of an awesome story!!!

R xx

Author's Response: Your review truly made my day! I almost never have reviews to come to so yours was a nice surprise (although yes i requested it i didnt know when you would get around to it). Thank you so much for the great review i'm really glad that you liked the beginning and you think that its going places. Thank you so much!

~Slytherinchica08~


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