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Review:Silk Tea says:
Its Silk Tea from the forums! Sorry it took me long to do this review.

I love,love, love this plot. When I began to read it, I thought it was going to be another cliche story. But it definitely is not! I love how you characterized Fiona. She mean, controlling, and a whole lot of drama. She reels me in to know more about her.

Jaycee is the typical fan girl. But you have her with a secret that all the other girls don't know. I love how you put in this chapter about how she knows more about James then the other girls do. One thing though, go more into depth about Jaycee. Like maybe you can write about how she knows more about James and how she began to be in this fan club. When did she start to like him?

I very much like Addison as well. She stood up for herself and I love that she had the power to brake away from Fiona.

I will definitely continue to review this story!

Author's Response: Hey,

I'm so sorry sorry it took so long to reply! And I can understand you taking your time. I've my own review thread, and I haven't reviewed a fic in weeks. :(

Anyway, Thanks! thanks! thanks! :D Glad you thought it wasn't cliche. I tried my best not to make it so. Though, how it plays out in the future is another story altogether! ;)

I'll be sure to expand more on Fiona, And as I mentioned in every other review- Jaycee. I tend to reveal my characters' personality a little slowly, and I know it maybe a little frustating, but that's how I write. :(

The james thing and beginning of the fan-club *is* a major part of the plot. I hate, plot-less fics ;). It would be revealed later, be assured!

I like Addison too! Infact, why she stood up for herself is another story too which I think i would put up as another fic. I'm slowly working on the idea- let's see how soon I'm able to pen it. :)

Thanks! :D


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