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Review:Aero says:
Great job with the characters and the flow of this piece, but a few things disconcerted me when it came to grammar/spelling. Here are some things I'd like to point out:

In this chapter's title, you spelled prologue incorrectly. Instead of Prolog, it should be Prologue.

First sentence: In the beginning my live was not very eventful I lived in a room with lots of other animals.

Instead of live, it should be life and a period should be added after 'eventful'.

Other than that, there are a few more grammar, spelling, and capitalization errors. Like I said though, your characters and plot are brilliant. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hope I was helpful!

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out the mistakes. It was very helpful. I corrected them now.
My English teacher always tells me that I make the "live" mistake far to often. It is one of my typical mistakes. It is kind of embarrassing that I still make it after someone corrected it about hundreds of times. Anyway (sorry about my rambling) thanks a lot for the review.
I`m very glad that you liked my story so far.

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