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Review:LilyFire says:
Okay, I know this is like...a month late and I'm sorry. Time seems to creep away from me and I don't know where it goes.

This seems pretty good, and it really draws the reader in, which is good since it's what a prolouge is suppose to do. I'm left wondering what Bella did to her-crucio, probably, but thats just a guess.

I normally don't read stories where James has a sister, but this seems to be pretty good!

~Lily

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And no worries, I am just as far behind on my own reviews. I'm glad that you approved of my hook-ness. :)
The whole James's sister thing...I'll admit, it's a plot device borne of laziness and a lack of other ways to make certain things work out. Don't worry, I'm trying to avoid cliches.
Thank you for this wonderful review!!
hugs,
Lucky


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