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Review:UH60TI says:
Nicely done. I like the way you are using a cat for the point of view. Really interesting.

Now, some issues I saw: when you use "big ones" it should be capatalized like Muggle, Auror, Death Eater ect. I also saw some spelling mistakes. When you use the phrase "human kitten" I think you should stick to "Big Ones", that way you maintain the perspective of the cat.

I like how you have captured the voice of a kitten in the story, just like that of a child. I hope as Rose gets older the cat matures with her. I am sure it will.

Again, very well done.

I look forward to more of this story.

Author's Response: I`m really glad you like the story so far.

I think I`m going to capitalize it from now on and correct it in this chapter. Thank you for that idea. I didn`t thought of doing that.
I`m sorry about the spelling mistakes, I`m not a native English speaker (that is probably not a very good excuse, but it kind of explains the mistakes).
I have the next chapter written, i just have to read it through again.
Thank you again for the review.

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