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Review:yazzers says:
i really like where this story is going, but you should probably watch your POVs. sometimes you switch from 1st person to 3rd person within a few sentences and it gets confusing:

Ellie looked passed her and made eye contact with James Portland. She quickly looked away and back at Veronica. “Sort of. Why?”

“Well, he wants you to take his order,” she glanced at the two drinks in **my** hand, “Are those Tom and Margie’s?”

10/10!

Author's Response: Oh oops! Thanks! I'll go fix those little errors! :D

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