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Review:Grace says:
First of all, I'm really liking this story and I really like the way you write, but you really need to brush up on your geography and do some research into English universities. As a Brit, it kills me to see Oxford University referred to as somewhere in London, because it is in OXFORD, hence the name Oxford University, which is about an hour and a half away from London by car, definitely not walking distance from any location in London. Also, Oxford University is not a campus university but has its buildings and colleges spread throughout the city. Having said this, I did like the comparison of Oxford to Hogwarts, as the architecture of the colleges etc. is similar to that of Hogwarts. Anyway, I implore to do research into the places you are writing about, instead of assuming it is exactly the same as it is in the US. ( If you are not in fact from the US, I apologise, only the language in the writing suggests you are) I should also add that I mean all of this in a constructive manner, as I am enjoying this story and look forward to the next chapter, it merely infuriates me to see English characters and places be so 'Amercianised' time and time again on this site.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you are liking it and I apologize for the lack of knowledge of Oxford and London. I am indeed an American and as such, I know little of any other country in the world like most Americans (we are a conceited bunch). I will do some editing to make it work a bit better and Damn! I hate that my writing sounds American. Haha, I'll work on that too. I have no idea how Europeans actually talk.

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