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Review:UH60TI says:
Very nicely done. You have captured the feeling of helplessness after the battle very well. No one who was involved in the battle will come out untouched.

There are many forms of Post Traumatic Stress, some are very mild and need no treatment while others are completely dibillitating. Most warriors suffer some where in the middle.

I like the fact Hannah is begining to realize she has a problem (most folks don't for, sometimes, years).

This is a very well written piece and very easy to read. You seem to have a natural storyteller's gift. You describe the events, setting and use dialouge very well.

I look forward to reading more of this story and more of your work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely review! I'm really happy that you used the word 'helpless' because I think that's one of the best adjectives you could use to describe the effect I wanted.

Oddly, I've never really thought of Hannah - or the others - suffering from Post Traumatic Stress. It sounds quite obvious now but I am by no means a psychologist and would never wish to pretend that I am. Hannah slowly comes round to the idea that she isn't 'back to normal' - it does fluctuate for her.

Thank you so much. I'm really happy that you took the time to leave a review. It's really made me think!

I hope you enjoy the rest of this; sadly, everything else is a little less ... substantial than this in terms of its plot. More romance, less thought-inducing! I'm working on the next chapter as I type so hopefully my block on this story will be conquered soon!

Thanks again.

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