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Review:charlottetrips says:
This was beautifully written. I love the flow of your writing (which includes "Masterpiece"), how the thoughts flow seemlessly one to the next. The descriptions are fanciful yet down-to-earth.

I actually really liked this story mainly because ScoRose tends to be "meant to be" and "perfect" type stories. This does show the foolishness of those who move too fast without thoughts to the consequences.

"You’ve learnt that you should never listen to your heart; it has nothing at all worth saying." This line, I felt, just embodied the whole story--the innocence of young love and the bitterness that can follow.

xChar

Author's Response: Yaaay I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I often struggle over descriptions, so that's especially nice to hear :)

That was my inspiration for this story, really - the fact that Rose and Scorpius are so often shown to be madly in love with each other, but this is usually only while they're at school, and post-school Scorose stories are a little bit rarer, I think. So I thought I'd write something where yes, they were madly in love at sixteen, seventeen, eighteen, but then what happened?

I'm glad you liked that line, I must say I'm quite fond of it myself :P Thanks for all your lovely comments!

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