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Review:Aurorofthelight says:
(Editors note: it's confrontations not confrentations):). You are off to a good start and I like the plot on this story! Also interesting to see a Harry as an unforgiving prat instead of the usual Harry! Can't blame him for being upset but he has to learn that when you truly love someone(Ginny) you sometimes have to forgive first! The main suggestion I have for you is quit writing the story as if you are narrating the action instead of simply telling the story! For example, instead of writing "Harry walks up to Ginny, takes her into his arms and kisses her passionately", word it like "Harry walked up to Ginny, took her into his arms and and kissed her passionately". This will make your story a much easier and more enjoyable read and you'll also get better reviews! I'd also rework the current chapters to remove the narrator! I look forward to future chapters! Good luck!

Author's Response: If you don't like don't read because I'm not looking for a beta thank you very much .

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