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Review:ImagineHarmony says:
Hello there :)

Well, your third character POV is really good. At first I was just a bit confused if the sentences in single apostrophes were thoughts, but then I recovered quite fast *laughs* Anyways, you could use the double apostrophes ("). I just love your descriptions of things! There are some people who just give a simple description of only one line, and there are some who give too many paragraphs on description that you forget the whole thing too soon >.<

But you however, have pretty good detail & description talents *nods head* Keep up the good work :)

On the note, there are a few typos, be sure to recheck next time xD


Author's Response: Hi! :D

*Breathes huge sigh of relief* I'm so happy! Always been very worried about my third person so this had really put the confidence in me :D

Ooops! Yeah I might go back and do that! Thanks for the heads up :P Im also really happy you liked my description, part of me was worried I'd done to much in an attempt to work on my 3rd person haha!

*Scurries off to change Typos!*

Thank you soo much for reveiwing this so quickly for me :D

R xx

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