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Review:Why So Sirius says:
You have got this fan girl stuff down, seriously. This is a little crazy! That's good, though, if your story is about a fan girl. Fan girls tend to be crazy. Scratch that- girls tend to be crazy.
Anyways, I feel like there was a lot of dialouge in this chapter. I want to know what Jaycee was thinking and maybe see her personality a bit more. Again, I don't know a lot about her yet. Maybe you could expand on that a bit?

Anyways, I'm excited to read more!

-Britney (pottersinsomniac)

Author's Response: I agree! Girls tend to be crazy! And while I may not have a whole lot of experience on that front, I'm glad you think it was believable! :)

The dialogue was necessary for this chapter. And don't worry. I tend to reveal the personalitites of my characters a little slowly, so that it is not an information dump. The next chapter would shed more light on her personality, hopefully!

Thanks! :D


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