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Review:academica says:
Hey there! This is academica with your review :)

I loved this one. I think Regulus is a really interesting character, and I don't read many fics about him. I thought you characterized him really well, particularly with the lines about how if he didn't torture the girl, he would take her place and also the one about how embarrassing his family would be excruciating pain. You have definitely painted a canon-compliant picture of him as a Death Eater who is in well over his head, shoved along by his family's ideals. The tenderness he displayed for Kreacher, his elf, was quite touching.

I thought it flowed very well. I could see definite parallels between Regulus's disgust over having to kill and the fact that he threw up again when he thought Kreacher might be dead. The ending was entirely appropriate, I think, and I loved that you made him very brave while looking death in the face even though he claimed to be a coward throughout the tale.

I really enjoyed this piece, and I saw no obvious grammar/punctuation/spelling issues, either. I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to check out Story Recommendations and post this one under an appropriate category if it isn't already there. I just think others might want the chance to read it :)

Thanks for requesting a review! It was a pleasure to read, and I hope my comments are helpful :)

academica

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I have such a huge smile on my face right now...

I'm glad that you think I characterized him well and doubly glad that you thought the ending was appropriate.

And Oh. My. Gosh! Thanks so much for the recommendation! It means a lot to me.

Thanks so much for reviewing- and so quickly, too!

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