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Review:Deltaris says:
This is so cute and funny. The things that Jaycee described about the fan club are just hilarious.

I think that you portray what Jaycee is feeling and thinking very well. Everything that we need to know is in the story, and it's not weighted down by pointless details or filler scenes.

I'm very glad that Jaycee went after Addison, even if she didn't immediately :) It shows that she does care more about her friends than some boy.

I get the feeling that this is going to be a pretty light piece, it's quite nice. Sometimes those that are just for fun are the best.

As far as your concerns about Jaycee being believable, I'd say you've done a good job so far. It is easy to lose your OC to cliche, however, so just be careful about that.

Author's Response: Funny? Really? And cute? whoa.

Hehe! thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I did my best. Thouughh, jaycee didn't go after Addison. I know, I know you hate her now :P. But really, when she said 'best-friend' in the last line, she meant someone else entirely. It'd be clear in the next chapter. :)

Yes, it's going to be a fun, fluffy piece-definitely not my forte ;)

I know, it would be easy, but I'll try my best not to, I can assure you! :D

Thanks for the super-amazing review!


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