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Review:Deltaris says:
I love the style this was written in. I love stories that do the first person POV in such a way, no clue why. They just get me connected to the character and get me laughing.

I like your OC so far. As you said, we don't typically get the insight of a fan-girl. I'm interested to see where this goes and how you develop Jaycee.

I'm glad to see that this is a new style of writing for you. We all need to broaden our horizons, so to speak :) And it's pretty brave of you. I've tried writing things similar to this just for kicks, and have had such a hard time with it.

Author's Response: Awweee *fan-girly squeal* :P I'm glad you liked it!

thanks! I'm glad you connected to Jaycee, when even I couldn't. Much.

Exactly. We do. I wouldn't call myself brave, though. More like foolishly meandering into things. Hehe. I just got this idea and wrote it down; didn't think through it much. :)

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