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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
Sirius is definately getting in way over his head with his feelings for Isabelle. It's becomming more and more obviously by his thoughts, words, and actions that he has feelings for her, despite the fact that he seems to not want to admit it to himself. I really can't wait to see how he handles these feelings once he does realize that they are there.

The party sounds super interesting, what with most of the main characters going to be there. Certainly sounds like a promising read to me!

Lily agreeing to break the rules and go to a party with James definately seems like a rather significant moment in their relationship...I can't help but wonder if they both realize the double meaning in them going to the party "together."

Anyways, I'm off to the next chapter, and definately can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I have been having the greatest challenge writing from Sirius' point of view. So many people have a very specific image of him, whether they got it from Rowling, from stories they have read on hpff, or from the movies. It's hard to stay true to his character while also adding my own interpretation, so that is why I am not rushing his interactions with Isabelle.

The next chapter will attempt to clear some things up, but it will also help move the plot along a bit. And yes, I have been trying to give James and Lily a bit of attention, because I think their relationship is just so cute!

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