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Review:faerieall says:
Oh my god. Rita. YOU PERFECT ANGEL. I LOVE THIS. I decided against reviewing each chapter because let's be honest, you have lots of reviews to read and I think 7 of my blathering ones would just clutter everything up.

First up - I LOVE GORGEOUS (and caps lock apparently...) I want to date him. He looks like Henry Cavill, is a sweet bartender and is literally like too perfect to be true. And I love him with Rose.

I love all of the girls and their relationship issues. You really covered it all. The too-perfect relationship, the workaholic, the commitment-a-holic, and the one that got screwed over by a bad guy.

I loved this chapter best. Especially the line about Lucy's life being a three-act play. That captured so much of what I've seen in many women and it was great. From the sisterly-bond the girls have eating takeaways in bed to the Unflushables, this would make a great story outside of fan-fiction... in fact, besides the characters, we haven't seen much magic have we? Which is a bit curious but I'm not complaining in the slightest! If you wrote something and got it published I would be the first person in line (granted, I only know the basic facts about you from my time at TDA but I'd track it down anyways)

Also, Scorpius Malfoy being frutier than a muffin basket in Elton John's pantry... brilliant. I think Gorgeous is my favorite... because he's gorgeous, but Rose definitely follows. She reminds me of myself, I guess.

So yeah. Obnoxiously long review but all of it had to be said. This story is fantastic and I cannot wait until you update it.

-Nisha

Author's Response: NISHA! *tackleglomphugattack*

I'VE MISSED YOU SO MUCH! Thanks so much for this review. You tracked me down and now I have no choice but to love you forever.

I'm glad you liked this chapter best because here, even though they talk about boys and their relationships and such, it's not really about the guys. It's about them. Just them as people, as friends, as family. You get to see how Lucy really feels, how vulnerable Rose really is, how Molly loves and hates her job at the same time, how Lily isn't just a stick of sugar (alright, maybe that's a lie LOL!) But yeah, the thing I enjoyed most about writing this chapter is just giving the reader a good look at the girls and just introducing them properly.

Again, I am so glad you liked the story! MAMA LOVES YOU!


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