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Review:taylorj828 says:
Hi there, very nice beginning! I like the idea of this story - Draco's son being a Squib?? Wow, whoever thought of that happening? I think it could make for a very great story, and you've already got its beginning here. Draco seems pretty in character, with not knowing what to do with the boy and being terribly awkward about it. And you've set up good reasons for him to already begin to doubt his son's magical abilities. Mostly this just makes me want to know what will happen next, and that's a good sign for a first chapter! (o:

Just a few errors, for example typos like: of/off and apon/upon. Otherwise, pretty nice!

Author's Response: Thanks! I've had this story in my head for ages - I just never got round to writing it! Next chapter is awaiting validation, I hope you wont be disappointed :).

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