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Review:Sincerely_Snape says:
Ok so I read the others yesterday night, but I couldn't read anymore because I had to get up early this morning, and I really wanted to read the Frank/Dom one-shot before bed. Ok, so yes Frank with the toothbrush was hilarious. I loved it!

I'm a little worried with what's going to happen with Allison and James. She seems to really like him, and it's a little confusing as to why she doesn't want to be with him. It's due to the list I guess, and it sounds like you're going to make that become the plot; the group getting rid of her stupid list. I would like to suggest, since you mentioned that you were having writer's block on TYSD, that you should do some character development with the both of them. What I want at this point in the story is to see Allison grow and become a better person because of James and vice versa. The story has gone into a bit of a slump, but I know you can pull it out and make it beautiful. Stay strong!
-Dawn

Author's Response: I was thinking of doing that: having them better each other, etc. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS UGH YOU'RE AMAZING. I am going crazy with this fic and I don't want everyone to leave me, because I still love James and I want to tell Allie's story. You've definitely helped and don't be surprised if I give a shout-out for you in a future author's note (probably begging for advice, lol) Once again, you're lovely and these reviews were lovely- I thought nobody even read this story anymore. SO THANK YOU.
xx


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