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Review:justonemorefic says:
I saw your status and thought, silly silly delete. I must see what this is!

I like the subtle way you built it up. I didn't realize it was the afterlife at first, but the imagery added up (of the what's done is done and the serene dreaminess and Snape being a child). It makes so much sense that he would arrive as a child, not an adult like I usually see, so this is a fresh spin. It's his happiest days before he had anything to regret.

I love how you wrote his dialogue. I could really feel Snape. I didn't appreciate it fully at first because I read it straight through, but then I realized how much it was really Snape for me, as a child and also as someone with so many regrets (when he begins with the apologies, I wanted to hug the poor thing so much D:). I wonder if he'd ever want to be his older self again.

Don't delete! I love these Snape-afterlife stories, and you write it so well! ♥

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I've always got my eye on that delete button but kind words always help stem the tide. I'm glad you thought it had a little something fresh in it. I know the plot is hardly new but I couldn't help taking a stab at it nonetheless. Thanks again for the encouragement!

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