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Review:taylorj828 says:
Very interesting summary, and I'm really interested in where you're going with this. Seamus is mighty unlucky! Maybe there's such a thing as an unluckiness curse? Or he broke some mirrors or something? LoL. I like how you had so many examples of his bad luck. (o: And of course I really want to know who this girl is now!!

Just a small thing - loose and soaping...
Loose is the opposite of tight.
Lose is the opposite of win.
Soap is what you clean with in the shower, so I guess soaping means putting soap on yourself. Hehe, but if we talk about a wet jacket due to heavy rain, it would be sopping wet.

Anyway, nice!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :P I'm always glad that people are enjoying my works.

Thank you for spotting those errors! I'll fix them as soon as I can. That always seems to be my problem; I just get typing too fast and then I'm usually too tired to look over my work really carefully when I'm finished. Just a flaw I guess... oh well!

Once again, thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it!

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